Your digital story made me think about my past and the changed plans and consequences in my life. One thing you might think about changing is reducing the sharpness of the voice over. The best thing about your digital story is how personable it is, the true hallmark of a digital story. Thanks for sharing!
How lucky I have been in my life. I think you are a very strong individual! Thank you for this digital story!
One thing you might think about changing is.....
I thought about changing the time limit. When I saw that it was almost 7 minutes, I thought - how can she talk about one thing for 7 minutes without boring the viewer? I am so happy that I watched every second and that you put more than one topic in your story You did amazing!
Purpose: 3 I didn’t understand what your purpose was Dramatic Question: 3 I didn’t know what your question was Emotion: 6 Economy: 4.5 not boring, just not less than 5 minutes Images: 6 Audio: 6 Credits: 6
Your digital story made me think about how you should never judge a book by its cover The things you might think about changing your credits. I like how you had them throughout the video, but sometimes they were distracting. Maybe just put them at the end. The best thing about your digital story is how you are still a success even though you had a unique upbringing.
Your digital story made me think about just how quickly you can affect someone. You told a powerful story in a short amount of time. If kids can do this it could get them involved and concerned about so much more.
One thing you might think about changing is the speed of the slides at times I thought maybe they changed a bit fast or slow at different times.
The best thing about your digital story is your ability to share your personal information with others in this way. This is something I could never do as I am too introverted to do this.
Well, I felt like your story was amazing. It was a digital biography, and worth the entire 7 minutes. I thought you did a nice job of pulling it together at the end with the race metaphor. Thank you for wearing your heart on your sleeve this one time.
Your digital story made me think about my past and the changed plans and consequences in my life. One thing you might think about changing is reducing the sharpness of the voice over. The best thing about your digital story is how personable it is, the true hallmark of a digital story. Thanks for sharing!
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ReplyDeleteHow lucky I have been in my life. I think you are a very strong individual! Thank you for this digital story!
One thing you might think about changing is.....
I thought about changing the time limit. When I saw that it was almost 7 minutes, I thought - how can she talk about one thing for 7 minutes without boring the viewer? I am so happy that I watched every second and that you put more than one topic in your story You did amazing!
The best thing about your digital story is....
Everything =)
Purpose: 3 I didn’t understand what your purpose was
ReplyDeleteDramatic Question: 3 I didn’t know what your question was
Emotion: 6
Economy: 4.5 not boring, just not less than 5 minutes
Images: 6
Audio: 6
Credits: 6
Your digital story made me think about how you should never judge a book by its cover
The things you might think about changing your credits. I like how you had them throughout the video, but sometimes they were distracting. Maybe just put them at the end.
The best thing about your digital story is how you are still a success even though you had a unique upbringing.
Your digital story made me think about just how quickly you can affect someone. You told a powerful story in a short amount of time. If kids can do this it could get them involved and concerned about so much more.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you might think about changing is the speed of the slides at times I thought maybe they changed a bit fast or slow at different times.
The best thing about your digital story is your ability to share your personal information with others in this way. This is something I could never do as I am too introverted to do this.
I do kind of regret sharing so much… I'm counting on never meeting any of you all in real life. lol :)
DeleteWell, I felt like your story was amazing. It was a digital biography, and worth the entire 7 minutes. I thought you did a nice job of pulling it together at the end with the race metaphor. Thank you for wearing your heart on your sleeve this one time.
ReplyDeleteYour story was complete and compelling. I like that told much about yourself because it puts the story into perspective.
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